New World Friends Chat: Kirby's "Really Cool Idea"
New World Friends Chat: Kirby's "Really Cool Idea"
---Kirby's "Really Cool Idea"--- kirby writes down a really cool idea. too bad nobody can read it... alt text: Kirby's house. Kirby's going out to take care of some business. Kirby, smiling wide: Oh! Before I leave, I had a really cool idea that I wrote down on a piece of paper! I hid it somewhe...
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Kirby's house. Kirby's going out to take care of some business.
Kirby, smiling wide: Oh! Before I leave, I had a really cool idea that I wrote down on a piece of paper! I hid it somewhere! Try to find it! Bye!
Bandee and Elfilin, happy: Bye Kirby!
They immediately start searching for that piece of paper. Not even ten seconds later...
Elfilin, happy: Found it! He just hid it under the table. Now, what "really cool idea" did he write down...?
Elfilin, sad: ...I can't read his handwriting. Bandee, can you read it?
Bandee, sad: ...No, I can't! I can usually read his handwriting just fine, but this is some really messy handwriting, even for him!
Bandee, happy: ...For his handwriting to be this bad, he must've been really excited! Let's just ask him about it when he comes back!
Some time later...
Elfilin: Kirby! You're back! We found the paper that you hid! ...But neither of us could read your handwriting. What was your "really cool idea?"
Kirby, happy: I, um, forgot! Lemme see what I wrote again...
Kirby, frowning: ...I can't read it, either!
The end.
this is a mini-installment of New World Friends Chat, the undertale text box thing that i'm now doing. first installment here (lemmy) or here (pixelfed, which is a image-sharing fediverse platform)
...it wasn't well received :(
if you have any criticism for this project, please share it so that i can more effectively contribute nice stuff to this community! anything from technical issues to art quality to writing/characterization to you-just-don't-want-to-see-this-project-on-c/kirby. what can i do better on?